Ingredient
Lists
Part II
List Informativeness Score
To
make it easier to consider the quality of information contained in pet product
ingredient lists, we have devised a grading protocol that gives each list a
measure of how it compares to the requirements of a human cosmetic ingredient
list. We could call this a measure
of the informativeness of a given list. For short, we can call it the Label/List Score.
Here’s how we
determine “Informativeness Score” for an ingredient list.
Start with 100 Points and subtract –
-20 points if
list seems incomplete (doesn't list water, preservatives, surfactants).
-15 points for
hiding ingredients under a general description, such as “shampoo base.”
-10 Points if
ingredients appear to not be in order of volume. (It takes some practice to
identify this practice).
-10 Points for
EACH ingredient that is described, not identified (other than fragrance). For
ex: "preservative",
"pH adjuster".
-5 Points for
EACH ingredient that is identified by trade name instead of chemical name. For
ex: "Cocamide D" instead of "Cocamide DEA", or
"EGMS" instead of "Ethylene Glycol Monostearate (EGMS)."
for each
ingredient using common or commercial name not using INCI names.
-5 points for
misplaced commas or spelling errors. (because it can be misleading)
-5 Points for
misleading information, such as "Essential Apple Oil Fragrance Oil"
(There is no such thing as an Essential Fragrance Oil, fragrances are either
synthetic fragrance oils or natural essential oils. Other than citrus fruits,
fruits cannot be distilled to obtain essential oils. )
Subtract Deductions from 100. Total remaining points is the LABEL/LIST
SCORE.
APPLICATIONS:
#1: Pet Silk Bright White (from label on bottle):
Ingredients: Deionized
Water, Tea Lauryl Sulfate, Sodium Laureth Sulfate, Mint Extract, Fennel
Extract, Mistletoe Extract, Yarrow Extract, Silk Proteins, Keratin, Amino
Acids, Betaine, Cocamide MEA, Chamomile Extract, Rosemary, Comfrey, Vitamin A,
Vitamin B, Vitamin E, Vitamin D, and Fragrance
-20 Points for
incomplete list. No preservative listed, no colorant listed (it is a dark blue
shampoo product.
-5 for trade
name, “Betaine”. Is this Cocamidopropyl
Betaine? There are several betaines used in cosmetics.
-5 X 4 for common
names of Vitamins.
-5 for misplaced
punctuation, Keratin, Amino Acids should probably be Keratin Amino Acids., or
proper INCI name: Hyrolyzed Keratin.
Total Deductions: 50. Ingredient List Score = 50
#2: EZ
Groom Crystal White (from MSDS provided by Company}:
Ingredients: DI water, Sodium Cocamphopropionate, Sodium Laureth Sulfate.
Enzywhite-SRW Complex, Lauramide DEA, Cocoamidopropylamine Oxide,
Cocoamidopropyl Hydroxysultaine, Propylene Glycol,
Disodium EDTA, Sodium
Hydroxymethylglycinate, Polysorbate 80, Cetyl Acetate, Acetylated Lanolin,
FD&C Colors,Fragrance.
No
Deductions. Ingredient List Score = 100
This ingredient list is complete, uses INCI names for
all named ingredients. It has one
unidentified ingredient, the proprietary Enzywhite-SRW Complex. I view this as a truly qualifying
“trade secret” ingredient, since it is unique to this manufacturer and it is
the ingredient that sets this formula apart from the competition. In such a case, we would not deduct
points.
#3:Furminator Deshedding Solution (from PetEdge
website):
Ingredients; Kava Extract, Hydrolyzed
Wheat Protein, Vitamin A, Omega 3 Fatty Acids, Omega 6 Fatty Acids, Hydrolyzed
Oat Protein, Vitamin E, Vitamin B5, Aloe Vera and Chamomile Extract.
Deductions:
-20 for
incomplete list. Where is water,
preservative? There needs to be an emulsifier, and/or a conditioner base.
-15 for hiding
ingredients (water).
-25. 5
ingredients use common names: Vitamin
A, Omega 3 Fatty Acids, Omega 6 Fatty acids, Vitamin E and Vitamin B5.
Total Deductions: 60 Points, Ingredient List Score = 40.
#4 Nootie
Sweet Pea & Vanilla Shampoo (from label):
Contains: Purified
water, decyl glucoside, coco betaine, glycerin, polyquat 7 (conditioner),
jojoba oil, infused with essence of sweet pea & vanilla, germall plus.
-15 for hiding
ingredients. Preservatives listed as trade name “germall plus”; INCI name - Diazolidinyl Urea, Iodopropynyl Butylcarbamate.
3 ingredients are
listed by trade names: coco betaine = cocomidopropyl betaine, polyquat 7 =
polyquaternium 7, germall plus. -15
-5 for misleading
information. There is no natural
‘sweet pea & vanilla’ essence. This is a synthetic fragrance.
Total deductions: 35 Ingredient List Score = 65.
#5 Davis Oatmeal Shampoo from web–
Ingredients: Collodial Oat Flour, Sodium Laureth Sulfate, Lauramide
D, Aloe Vera Whole Leaf, Purified Water, pH Adjuster, Sodium Lauryl Sulfate,
PEG Distearate, Thickening Agent, EGMS Fatty Acid Esters, Cosmetic Grade
Preservatives, Propylene Glycol, Essential Apple Oil Fragrance
-10 List seems
out of order
-30 Ingredient
description avoiding identification “pH Adjuster” “Thickening Agent”, Cosmetic
Grade Preservatives” .
-10 Use of Trade
Names rather than ingredient names: Lauramide D, EGMS.
-5
Misleading/misinformation – Essential Apple Fragrance Oil.
-5 for misspelling
and sloppiness.Colloidal Oatmeal.
Deductions: 60. Ingredient List Score = 40.
Note: By human product labeling regulations, this
list would also not be allowed to say “Whole Leaf” aloe vera, “purified” water,
or “cosmetic grade” preservatives.
#6 Tropiclean Oxy-Med Shampoo from product
label: Contains: Oatmeal, Alpha Hydroxys, Hydrolyzed Wheat Protein, and Vitamin
B-5 in a mild coconut shampoo base.
This is a list
that is declaring only the additives, and not accurately identifying those.
-20 incomplete list
-15 hiding
ingredients
-10 not in order
of volume
-10 ingredient
description, Alpha Hydroxys
-10 common names,
Oatmeal, and Vit.B-5
Deductions: 65. Ingredient List Score = 35
#7 Top Paw Oatmeal Baking Soda Shampoo. (Petsmart from website):
ingredients: Purified water,
anionic, non ionic, and amphoteric surfactants, acrylates cocopolymar, glycol
distearate, sodium bicarbonate, glycerin, collodial oatmeal, hydrolized silk
protein, aloe vera, fragrance, dmdm-hydantoin, tetrasodium edta.
-30 for generic
description of anionic, non-ionic and amphoteric surfactants. This could be at
least 3, and possibly 5 or 6 ingredients.
-15 for hiding
ingredients above.
-5 for
misspellings and sloppiness. Acrylates cocopolymar is Acrylates copolymer;
Collodial oatmeal is Colloidal Oatmeal, and hydrolized silk protein should be
Hydrolyzed Silk Protein.
Deductions: 50. Ingredient List Score = 50.
PS. Acrylates copolymer is a film former/holding
agent generally found in hair spray and styling products. It is never found in a shampoo. It is
hard to believe it is in there.
#8 ShowSeason Texture Shampoo (from
Technical Sheet supplied by mfr.):
Ingredients: Water, Alpha Olefin Sulfonate, Sodium Lauryl Sulfate,
Sodium Laureth Sulfate, Disodium Oleamido MEA Sulfosuccinate,
Cocamide MEA, Cocamidopropyl Betaine, DMDM Hydantoin, Fragrance.
No Deductions. Ingredient
List Score = 100.
#9 Theraneem Organix Pet Shampoo.
(From website).
Ingredients: Aqueous Extracts of Azadirachta
Indica (Neem) Leaf*, Chamomilla Recutita (Chamomile), Arnica Cordifolia
(Arnica) Flowers, Pinus nigra (Pine) bark, Ocimum Basillicum (Basil) and Prunus
serotina (Cherry) bark, Olefin Sulfonate, Polysorbate 20, Alkyl Polyglucoside,
Lauramide DEA, Peg-7 Glyceryl Cocoate, Azadirachta Indica (Neem) Oil*,
Glycerine, Panthenol, Sodium Chloride (Sea salt), Sodium Hydroxymethylglycinate
(from glycine), Fragrance (from Natural Ingredients), Citric Acid.* Certified
Organic
Kudos
to this “natural” pet shampoo for full disclosure of their ingredients and
using the INCI names for all, even for the botanicals. Deduct 5 points for Misleading
information, however, as the “Aqueous Extracts” of herbal ingredients suggest
that there are more herbal ingredients than surfactants or water and that is
not exactly true.
Ingredient
List Score = 95.
#10
Earthbath Shampoo (from website):
Ingredients: Purified water,
renewable coconut-based cleansers, gentle-conditioning agent, aloe vera,
hydrolized wheat protein, glycerine, mango essence, olive oil squalene (natural
preservative).
-30 for at least
3 ingredients that are described rather than identified, coconut-based
cleansers, conditioning agent.
-5 for misleading
information, “renewable coconut-based cleansers” can be the same SLS or SLES as
found in other pet shampoos, “gentle conditioning agent” can be Cocamidopropyl
Betaine found in many if not most commercial shampoos
-5 for
misspelling etc. glycerine – Glycerin; hydrosized wheat protein – hydrolyzed.
Total deductions: -40. Ingredient List
Score = 60
#11 Earthdog Shampoo (from website)
Ingredients: Liquid Castille Soap (Saponified Oils of Coconut &
Olive, Aloe Vera Gel, Rosemary Oil Extract), Distilled Water, Glycerin,
Simmondsia chinensis (Jojoba) Seed Oil, Extract of: Matricaria recutita
(Chamomile) Flower, Calendula officinalis (Calendula) Flowers, Urtica dioica
(Stinging Nettles) Leaf, Lavandula angustifolia (Lavender) Buds, Plantago major
(Plantain) Leaf, Stellaria media (Chickweed); Thuja orientalis (Cedarwood) Oil,
Pogostemon cablini (Patchouli) Oil, Eucalyptus globulus (Eucalyptus) Oil,
Pimenta racemosa (Bay) Oil, Eugenia caryophyllata (Clovebud) Oil, Lavandula
angustifolia (Lavender) Oil, & Melaleuca alternifolia (Tea Tree) Oil Tocopherol,
Hydrolyzed Oat Protein, Xanthan Gum."
List Score:
-20 Seems incomplete. No
emulsifiers to mix oil in water, no preservatives.
-10 not in order
of volume. Water should be first.
-5 for missing
comma – before Tocopherol.
Total Deductions 35: Ingredient List Score = 65
#12 Isle of Dogs Vanilla Jasmine Coating Shampoo (from Petco website):
Ingredients: Water (aqua), sodium laureth sulfate, cocamidopropyl
betaine, coco glucoside, glyceryl oleate, peg-3 distearate, aloe barbadensis
leaf extract, glycerin, dl-panthenol, propylene glycol, DMDM hydantoin,
iodopropynyl butylcarbamate, polysorbate 20, sodium chloride, citric acid,
caramel, fragrance.
No Deductions: List Score = 100
#13Best Shot UltraMAX Shampoo (from Pet Edge Website)
Ingredients: Aqua, Proprietary
Blend of Coat and Skin Cleansers including Concentrated Coconut, Surfactants
and Advanced Conditioning Agents, Hydrolyzed Wheat Protein, Aloe Vera Extract,
Rosemary Extract, Glycerol Stearate, Natural Essence, Citric Acid for PH
balancing, and Preservative.
-15 for hiding ingredients
under a general description (very well-crafted)
-40 for described, not
identified Coconut Surfactants and Conditioning Agents, Natural Essence
(fragrance), Preservative.
-5 for misplaced comma
Coconut, Surfactants
Total
Deductions: 60 Ingredient List Score = 40
Okay, it's your turn. Try out the scoring system on a label or list of your product. Of course this requires that you HAVE an ingredient list to start with. This is not an easy exercise, as it requires some familiarity with ingredient names and what should show up on a list. If you have lists that you would like me to score, post them in the comments below and I will try to get to it as time allows. For me, time can be a problem, but this is the kind of thing I love to do.

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